Sunday, 31 July 2016

Recount Writing - Ruma Tahi Tama

Boy’s Writing in Term 2
WALT write within the structure of a recount.          
Context: Tramping Callaghan’s Ridge
Audience:  New Zealand on-line audience.      Purpose: To create an interesting recount that might inspire others to take on the outdoor tramping experience.
Success Criteria: We will have met the learning criteria when we have clearly used the key features of a recount text to convey our experience of tramping Callaghan’s Ridge.
Mackay Shelter.jpg
Emergency Shelter - One tarpaulin and some string.
Whitcomb Shelter.jpg
Emergency Shelter - Two tarpaulins and some string.
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1 comment:

  1. Hi there, my name is Petulisa and I am a student in room 7 at Hay Park School. I really like how you used captions to show what it is about and how you included things you need. It made me think of the time I went to camp and made an emergency shelter. Have you thought about checking your sentence and see if it makes sense ( Jayden’s Recount) . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is


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